Ok I have good news and bad news. The bad news comes first.

Bad news

I just had a rant over twilight , I to tell the truth I hate the book to the very core, sorry twilight fans. It was so hard to get to myself to read past the first chapters, it bored the hell out of me so that I stopped reading and I put the book down at the part Jacob tells Bella the Cullens are vampires. I haven't read the whole book and I can't entirely back up my views, but for some reason when I start talking about the Twilight saga I throw myself into an angry fit and rant about how I hate the book (or preview of what I read so far). So to get this out of my system I am going to read twilight and do a review on it on my journal. So far I will state my current opinion:

- Bella is at first an emotionless idiot fangirl (which I hate) then from what I hear she becomes a jerk!
-The story has no ups and downs in it so it's all tortured souls and that sad relationship.
- Ok I get not wanting to be realistic and having a Romeo and Juliet effect so they can't be together, but they actually fight and try to be together but Edward and Bella they push themselves back, NO ONE IS STOPPING THEM THAT MUCH !!! ok so maybe there race is but can't they work around THAT!!! I mean seriously people.
-There is hardly any full felt romantic emotion there. It's like watching robots on a beach saying I love you.....but we can't be together goodbye.
-The fact that everyone drools over Twilight and says it is brillant then when you ask they never say why, how is that going to increase popularity?? basically this is what is happening-
Man: why do you enjoy the book so much?
fangirl: cause its awesome
man: aaanndd?
fangirl: cause its awesome
man: that sounds reasonable. I will buy that for my daughter not knowing if it's a waste of money or not.

Ok ok I wont rip it off. I mean having a girl and a vampire fall in love in the modern day world is a refreshing, suprising and new concept but please put some love and emotion in that and give the characters some, SOME!! life.
Twilight fans please don't hate me. As I have said I have not read the entire book and I might do review on it once I have read it so please don't get angry, swear, put rude comments and such. This is my own opinion and you have yours.
OK now I have finished ranting here is the good news.

Good news

I have just finished writing a short story and I will put half of it up on deviant art once I have finished polishing the other half. I will probably load that up too, the ending was too short and hardly any action. It sounded poetic which was a nice touch but all the tension that I built slowly was broken too quickly which ruined it. Goodnight before I collapse.